28-09-2023, 02:38 PM
(This post was last modified: 28-09-2023, 02:39 PM by garamrohan. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
No one would dare to say this was your first 'english' story. You rocked it! It was full of sexual and emotional tension. And the end was as apt as it was shocking. So I was fully satisfied by the read.
I must say, you have been done fabulous job by explaining debauchery of a mom and wife, Soma in third person narrative, which is damn difficult thing to do.
Kudos..
And beg you to please consider writing in english going ahead (along with bengali... I know there will be hardcore readers for your bengali stories).
I must say, you have been done fabulous job by explaining debauchery of a mom and wife, Soma in third person narrative, which is damn difficult thing to do.
Kudos..
And beg you to please consider writing in english going ahead (along with bengali... I know there will be hardcore readers for your bengali stories).

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