24-09-2023, 10:34 PM
Author may be already penning down all the modifications. However, I feel not very late to emphasize my points.
As the story stands after deleting last two chapters, Meera could settle with Desai, Krish or any other man of her choice. She could even have poised to become a high class escort, if not (If the event luck does not give her support) becoming a road side prostitute. Its author’s choice and I have nothing to speculate.
Definitely, I have a request.
I expect due respect for all the characters as they are woven. Barring a few incidents, attributes as well as motives of all three protagonists are distinct. Without proper stimulation, any aberration of the characters looks odd. It also destroys the storyline and appears to be forced on the characters.
Characterization till last two chapters
Desai:
He is socially, economically and physically powerful man with high libido. He is a self-created person of rock solid vision, mission and accomplishment. Being highly successful businessman, he plans his movements with utter precision and executes without much deviation to bring success. He is not distracted with apparent failures and have ability to turn the failures in his favour in due course. He has also been portrayed as a perfect mind reader. His weakness and appetite on sex is not a hidden fact.
Meera:
She is not only beautiful but also have brain with her. Also she has strong personalities. She is nymphomaniac. She searches for her long term sexual partners who are rich and powerful bestowed with high sexual stamina and god gifted endowment. She shares herself only at her own will and not under any compulsion. Though apparently she displays her love and attachment towards Krish, constantly she is in search for a gold mine to dig. She has enormous confidence in her and to accomplish her goal, she is least concerned about marriage and social restrictions. We have never seen her supporting her husband emotionally to get cured. Rather she aptly utilised her brain to manipulate Krish to enjoy her nymphomaniac character.
Desai is definitely different from all her previous sexual partners. She has displayed her emotional attachment to Desai. Even she shares her secrets with him while keeping her intimate relationship with him secret. She enjoys dictating terms and conditions in her relationship with Desai. Monetary gifts to Krish in terms of business was brainchild of Meera. She has mostly elevated herself as wedded wife to Desai in terms of their relationship.
Krish:
Though he has been graduated to a cuckold, for me it appears to be a forced one on him. Nonetheless, even accepting him as a cuckold, unlike all cuckolds, he is mentally strong. He is honest and intelligent and to some extent can read other’s mind. His love for Meera is beyond question and as such he ready to share his wife physically with almost anybody but emotionally with none. At times, he even agreed to make supreme sacrifice for Meera to make her happy. For example, during his separation with Meera, he advised her to settle the future terms and conditions with das.
With above backdrops :
While relentlessly persuading Meera, he understood her vulnerability. He wanted to win Meera completely for hooks and crooks. Even considering his evil motives (Though the same is not established), he invested a lot in terms of money and time for her. He made a lot of sacrifices and even pulled out of Pune business, possibly only to prove his devotion towards Meera. He shared his past completely and apparently made sacrifices to win Meera’s heart and confidence.
While Meera abstained from sex with him, aftermath Krish’s accident, it should not have been difficult for him to analyse Meera. She was testing his devotion and Desai should have understood it.. Possibly Desai was frustrated and immediately needed carnal pleasure. Pune is surrounded with hill stations. Dresai could easily get escort services anywhere. His engagement with Nidhi at Krish’s house while Krish is next room, taking all the risk is not matching with Desai characteristics. He can’t be made such fool.
Krish, known for affinity for liquors while in mental distress is well-established. While being shown the door by Meera, he is visiting Nidhi’s mother instead of a bar not in line with his character.
So, in my opinion, the chronological events created to thwart Desai from Meera’s life and paving the way for reconciliation of Krish-Meera are ill-conceived. They do not glorify the characters as painted earlier.
To bring clarity, Meera need to expose herself about her motives which should justify her all previous actions.
In a nutshell, the characters of protagonists should not be forced to satisfy anybody (Even to the author himself) even if it calls for permanent separation of Krish-Meera.
manasi
As the story stands after deleting last two chapters, Meera could settle with Desai, Krish or any other man of her choice. She could even have poised to become a high class escort, if not (If the event luck does not give her support) becoming a road side prostitute. Its author’s choice and I have nothing to speculate.
Definitely, I have a request.
I expect due respect for all the characters as they are woven. Barring a few incidents, attributes as well as motives of all three protagonists are distinct. Without proper stimulation, any aberration of the characters looks odd. It also destroys the storyline and appears to be forced on the characters.
Characterization till last two chapters
Desai:
He is socially, economically and physically powerful man with high libido. He is a self-created person of rock solid vision, mission and accomplishment. Being highly successful businessman, he plans his movements with utter precision and executes without much deviation to bring success. He is not distracted with apparent failures and have ability to turn the failures in his favour in due course. He has also been portrayed as a perfect mind reader. His weakness and appetite on sex is not a hidden fact.
Meera:
She is not only beautiful but also have brain with her. Also she has strong personalities. She is nymphomaniac. She searches for her long term sexual partners who are rich and powerful bestowed with high sexual stamina and god gifted endowment. She shares herself only at her own will and not under any compulsion. Though apparently she displays her love and attachment towards Krish, constantly she is in search for a gold mine to dig. She has enormous confidence in her and to accomplish her goal, she is least concerned about marriage and social restrictions. We have never seen her supporting her husband emotionally to get cured. Rather she aptly utilised her brain to manipulate Krish to enjoy her nymphomaniac character.
Desai is definitely different from all her previous sexual partners. She has displayed her emotional attachment to Desai. Even she shares her secrets with him while keeping her intimate relationship with him secret. She enjoys dictating terms and conditions in her relationship with Desai. Monetary gifts to Krish in terms of business was brainchild of Meera. She has mostly elevated herself as wedded wife to Desai in terms of their relationship.
Krish:
Though he has been graduated to a cuckold, for me it appears to be a forced one on him. Nonetheless, even accepting him as a cuckold, unlike all cuckolds, he is mentally strong. He is honest and intelligent and to some extent can read other’s mind. His love for Meera is beyond question and as such he ready to share his wife physically with almost anybody but emotionally with none. At times, he even agreed to make supreme sacrifice for Meera to make her happy. For example, during his separation with Meera, he advised her to settle the future terms and conditions with das.
With above backdrops :
While relentlessly persuading Meera, he understood her vulnerability. He wanted to win Meera completely for hooks and crooks. Even considering his evil motives (Though the same is not established), he invested a lot in terms of money and time for her. He made a lot of sacrifices and even pulled out of Pune business, possibly only to prove his devotion towards Meera. He shared his past completely and apparently made sacrifices to win Meera’s heart and confidence.
While Meera abstained from sex with him, aftermath Krish’s accident, it should not have been difficult for him to analyse Meera. She was testing his devotion and Desai should have understood it.. Possibly Desai was frustrated and immediately needed carnal pleasure. Pune is surrounded with hill stations. Dresai could easily get escort services anywhere. His engagement with Nidhi at Krish’s house while Krish is next room, taking all the risk is not matching with Desai characteristics. He can’t be made such fool.
Krish, known for affinity for liquors while in mental distress is well-established. While being shown the door by Meera, he is visiting Nidhi’s mother instead of a bar not in line with his character.
So, in my opinion, the chronological events created to thwart Desai from Meera’s life and paving the way for reconciliation of Krish-Meera are ill-conceived. They do not glorify the characters as painted earlier.
To bring clarity, Meera need to expose herself about her motives which should justify her all previous actions.
In a nutshell, the characters of protagonists should not be forced to satisfy anybody (Even to the author himself) even if it calls for permanent separation of Krish-Meera.
manasi
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