22-09-2023, 07:22 AM
Nice compilation but poor climax.
Henry closed this story at once because he is not finding enough time to write the stories nowadays.
This story definitely deserves PART 2. I cannot digest this climax.
Let Dawa and Soma come back again. Because in the new channel, they have mentioned only 2 bodies and they have mentioned any name. So, they are not dead yet and can give a come back.
Due to her injury Soma affected by memory loss and couldn’t remember anything. The local nearby village people has rescued her and were giving her treatment for 2 years. In 2 years of treatment slowly slowly she starts remembering that she has a family - husband and 2 children and they lived in Kolkata. So, she understands this truth and travelled back to Kolkata to see her family. But then she comes to know the truth through her neighbors that Subhir has sold the flat and moved to Delhi. Then she travels to Delhi to meet Subhir and explained her situation and told him that she had memory loss and remember only few things. Subhir was happy hearing this that she doesn’t remember Dawa and they started living again like husband and wife in Delhi.
Dawa try to find this truth and comes to Delhi to meet Soma and tries to remind and explain her everything, but Soma doesn’t remember anything and reacts completely like a stranger. Dawa understands the situation and stays in Delhi find a watchman job nearby Soma’s house and try to get close to Soma again. This time Soma will be a tough target because she stays with her husband.
And the usual story starts again!!!
There are many stories has been concluded and then continued as part 2 due to readers wish and comments. So, this story should be continued too and we require majority of audience to support on this to continue. May be Henry can consider this to continue in such a way, if he is not interested or doesn’t have time someone who are good in writing stories can continue with Henry’s permission.
Henry closed this story at once because he is not finding enough time to write the stories nowadays.
This story definitely deserves PART 2. I cannot digest this climax.
Let Dawa and Soma come back again. Because in the new channel, they have mentioned only 2 bodies and they have mentioned any name. So, they are not dead yet and can give a come back.
Due to her injury Soma affected by memory loss and couldn’t remember anything. The local nearby village people has rescued her and were giving her treatment for 2 years. In 2 years of treatment slowly slowly she starts remembering that she has a family - husband and 2 children and they lived in Kolkata. So, she understands this truth and travelled back to Kolkata to see her family. But then she comes to know the truth through her neighbors that Subhir has sold the flat and moved to Delhi. Then she travels to Delhi to meet Subhir and explained her situation and told him that she had memory loss and remember only few things. Subhir was happy hearing this that she doesn’t remember Dawa and they started living again like husband and wife in Delhi.
Dawa try to find this truth and comes to Delhi to meet Soma and tries to remind and explain her everything, but Soma doesn’t remember anything and reacts completely like a stranger. Dawa understands the situation and stays in Delhi find a watchman job nearby Soma’s house and try to get close to Soma again. This time Soma will be a tough target because she stays with her husband.
And the usual story starts again!!!
There are many stories has been concluded and then continued as part 2 due to readers wish and comments. So, this story should be continued too and we require majority of audience to support on this to continue. May be Henry can consider this to continue in such a way, if he is not interested or doesn’t have time someone who are good in writing stories can continue with Henry’s permission.