22-09-2023, 04:33 AM
Very well and fluently written, the description of the sex scenes detailed and vivid.
I enjoy every single line, because they are incredibly erotic...
If this was not an "erotic story", I would have described Banavi like this:
Immoral, naive, bratty and topped off with disrespect....
These are the behavioural codes of Bavani.
Maybe someone should whisper in Bavani's ear that marriage does not only consist of "vagina and penis".
There are many other weighty and significant things that make married life what it is.
She behaves like an immature 14 year old brat who has fallen head over heels in love with a boy of the
same age for the first time and gets an orgasm while briefly holding hands....
Bavani:
"I do not blow Mohan with that intensity.
When interacting with Mohan, I do not let myself go the way I do with Vikram..."
these and similar statements from her on one side, but on the other side:
"My man cannot satisfy me the way Vikram does..."
What a logic !
I cannot stand such persons who behave and act similarly to Vikram in life and also in stories.
Mostly they have failed in real life, have inferiority complexes, suffer strongly from narcism.
... And the naive, dick-driven wife and mother Banavi falls for such an impostor.
I fear that she will lose everything and end up with empty hands in the middle of nothing.
Unless Mohan does not drop her (after all she has done) and reaches under her arms....
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda
I enjoy every single line, because they are incredibly erotic...
If this was not an "erotic story", I would have described Banavi like this:
Immoral, naive, bratty and topped off with disrespect....
These are the behavioural codes of Bavani.
Maybe someone should whisper in Bavani's ear that marriage does not only consist of "vagina and penis".
There are many other weighty and significant things that make married life what it is.
She behaves like an immature 14 year old brat who has fallen head over heels in love with a boy of the
same age for the first time and gets an orgasm while briefly holding hands....
Bavani:
"I do not blow Mohan with that intensity.
When interacting with Mohan, I do not let myself go the way I do with Vikram..."
these and similar statements from her on one side, but on the other side:
"My man cannot satisfy me the way Vikram does..."
What a logic !
I cannot stand such persons who behave and act similarly to Vikram in life and also in stories.
Mostly they have failed in real life, have inferiority complexes, suffer strongly from narcism.
... And the naive, dick-driven wife and mother Banavi falls for such an impostor.
I fear that she will lose everything and end up with empty hands in the middle of nothing.
Unless Mohan does not drop her (after all she has done) and reaches under her arms....
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda