20-09-2023, 11:21 PM
(16-09-2023, 03:40 AM)abhinay67 Wrote: For the next episode, make the husband come home early to surprise Bhavani and let him find out about his wife's love affair . Don't make him a cuckold or forgiving husband, that will go against the character of the husband. I don't think there can be a happy ending for the husband.If I do that the story would come to a conclusion too quickly. So wait and see.
(16-09-2023, 09:56 AM)zulfique Wrote: Sexy updateThanks
(16-09-2023, 11:20 AM)Jayam Ramana Wrote: Super broThanks
(16-09-2023, 02:27 PM)a2011 Wrote: awesome update..shouldnt she be refusing sex with her husband after such an intense sex session with her lover?She should but didn't want to refuse for fear of raising her husband's suspicion.
(16-09-2023, 02:40 PM)Gilmalover Wrote: Splendid writingThanks
(16-09-2023, 04:35 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Simply awesome.....Thank you very much.
Great writing skills....
Sensational update.....
(18-09-2023, 04:14 AM)a2011 Wrote: great update...Bhavani's inner feelings n conflicts are all very well written...Thank you. She would always suffer the conflicting emotions
(20-09-2023, 10:31 PM)samcoolpatil007 Wrote: Story is excellent.. writting skills are also amazing.. however so much gap in providing the updates kills the excitement and interest..Sorry, I can only write when I get the time. Sometimes I get more time so updates come faster sometimes when time doesn't permit updates become slower. Also now I'm trying to give bigger updates.
Just completed the update and posting it now.