18-09-2023, 07:19 AM
Very nice brother, there is no match of storytelling style which you invented, the mind process of waiter when he recalls the incident of past and efforts of Anita to stay in the same seat where that man is staying, he even try to enter in her salwar same like hariya, all these things and setup of atmosphere of local dhaba is extremely realistic, she herself keeps Ankit away, all this takes time and that's justified and plz ignore fast action seeking readers, it's not their fault, they are searching porn in erotica and do not understand nuances of eroticism. Hope from next month we'll get regular updates and story will get some speed.