11-09-2023, 08:51 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-09-2023, 08:53 PM by Rajeev Gupta. Edited 3 times in total. Edited 3 times in total.)
Your story kicked off well and interesting. But unfortunately, it gradually became boring because the story lacked an emphasis on anal sex. You mentioned about your mom's ass size being 42 inch, that sounds fat and big. Then how comes in the whole story, we only get to read that Gajedra fucked your mom's ass only ONCE? That doesn't sound interesting to most of readers. We expected more anal sex and buttfucking.
And in that instance, you didn't even emphasize more about the action of anus fucking. If the story is only about pussy fucking, then I am afraid readers will cease to read your story. Good stories encapsulate all the aspects of sexual intercourse. Going forward, at least incorporate & emphasize more on anal sex. Because how can your mom have such a big ass of 42 inches and fail to have her sweet asshole plugged?
And in that instance, you didn't even emphasize more about the action of anus fucking. If the story is only about pussy fucking, then I am afraid readers will cease to read your story. Good stories encapsulate all the aspects of sexual intercourse. Going forward, at least incorporate & emphasize more on anal sex. Because how can your mom have such a big ass of 42 inches and fail to have her sweet asshole plugged?
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