10-09-2023, 09:12 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-09-2023, 09:13 PM by দত্তাত্রেয় বন্দ্যোপাধ্যায়. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
You are indeed a very versatile writer. From poetry to prose, you write everything. Probably drama is the only thing which you haven't done yet.
Though I enjoy the entire poem, I would suggest you to amend one line of this poem, "কিংবা হয়তো ঝুলিয়েই দেবে আমার গলায় মালা to কিংবা হয়তো ঝুলিয়ে দেবে আমার ফটোয় মালা
Anyway this was I think would be more appropriate. I will try to read the remaining 46 writings soon. Kudos
Warm Greetings