07-09-2023, 07:53 PM
(03-09-2023, 05:51 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: Physical pain heals, but mental will killAs I had written, Mohan could see that something was troubling his wife and he had a pretty good idea what it was. He hired an agency for two weeks to check on his wife. His thinking was if something was going on it would surely come out within that time. He couldn't engage the agency for very long because a good detective agency was expensive (I did some background checking on this). Fortunately for Bavani she was trying desperately to avoid Vikram at that time and hence she escaped. Would she always be so fortunate? We'll have to wait and see.
Hubby's Pain has started. It will ruin him for sure.
How come, wifey escaped getting caught by private detective - Her chat with Vikram started conveniently post detective stopping? Something missing here?
(03-09-2023, 07:04 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: Will Hubby goes into depression. Would love that. Hubby struggling more and more to please but the mental pain affecting.The Husband would have his own struggles as will the wife. The guy having the best of everything for the time being would be Vikram.
Would Bavani even care about him now that her Body's needs have started to outweigh her rational Senses
(04-09-2023, 05:14 AM)a2011 Wrote: Awesome update!Thank you
(05-09-2023, 04:11 AM)a2011 Wrote: Can't wait for the next update...things are getting exciting..As soon as I can.
(06-09-2023, 11:42 PM)hero123p Wrote: Last line "Hi How are you?" was awesome. So Bhavani has decided. Let see how it goes.Thank you. I would be happy if this story too gets the same positive response as "My wife, why did she betray me."
Your writing is exceptional. I believe this story will also go to same height as "Why did my wife betray..." emotionally and erotically (even higher).
(07-09-2023, 05:39 AM)a2011 Wrote: Please dont make us wait too long for the next update..
I am almost completing the Tamil Version of 'The Impact of Lust'. I was writing the second last episode the last few days and so I couldn't write anything on this story. Soon I will finish it (though I take a bit longer to write in Tamil then in English) and then I can fully concentrate on this story. I started yesterday and have just finished an update that I'm going to post now.
My thanks to all of you who had taken the trouble to comment. Comments are the tonic needed to continue to write.