06-09-2023, 10:40 AM
(06-09-2023, 12:57 AM)0987654321mnb Wrote: Mai 20 bar se upar iss story ko read kiya hai , aur bohot bariki se writer ka baat samjha hai... Issiliye mujhe pura 100% nahi balki 100000% yakin hai ki yeh story ek alag hee mukam par jayega....
Writer ne ek baat bataye hai iss story mai ,, woh hai ,,, abdull ka lund ka size 10' aur mota 4' lekin abdull ka lund se randiya darte nahi randiya darte hai abdull ka darindigi se . Ab darindigi mathlab yeh nahi abdull kisi ka murder kar de ,,, darindigi ka matalab yeah ,,, dirty sex ... Ab 5 minutes ke liye aap sab aankh band karke sochiye,,, jab abdull innocent shradha ke sath aise darindigi sex karega mathlab abdull ka badbudar Ganda sa gand chatna, Abdull shradha ko apna pisab pilayega yeh sab jab hoga aur shradha bhi emotional hoke yeh sab karega to kaisa manzar hoga !!!!
Agar story ko bariki se read karoge to bohot kuch samajh mai ayega... Mai issiliye bol raha hu iss story mai jo jo fantasis, erotic feelings hai waise aur kisi bhi stories mai nahi milega...
Janta hu kuch log bolege ke aise bohot Sara stories hai par Aisa plot aur carecters kisi bhi stories mai nahi hai.
Aur to aur aisa stories likhna bhi sab writer ka bass ki baat bhi nahi hai...
Mujhe ummed nahi balki pura yakin hai yeh story top level ka story hoga. Bass sab readers ka sath hona chahiye bass....
Okay I hope ki story poori ho payegi