Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

[abhinay67]

Firstly, I too hope I do not belong to the authors in your second category. 
Secondly, my apologies for delaying what I had promised after the last chapter of this story. Honestly speaking, I have enjoyed a long vacation after the ending of this story. Many people here are waiting for a rewriting of the last one or two chapters, and my apology is to all of them for keeping them waiting so long. 
Writing the last few chapters of the story was a tiring experience for me. And I realised it even more during the gap after that. I no longer had to think about how to find time to do my daily activities. Because I was a free man, not filled with forced erotic thoughts. 
Anyways, a promise is a promise. I will have to rewrite those one or two chapters. For that I will have to start. 
 I need help from the readers for that. I want you to tell me (again) what is wrong with the ending part according to you, and I want you to tell me what suggestion do you have to make it better. If I think it is okay and it is required to make it better then I will consider it. If I am still adamant that the part in my version was supposed to be like that, then I will make no changes.
I think reading through your discussions will put me again back into the world of Meera and Krish. 
During the break, you know, I had thought about two short stories. One is the second part of 'the accident' and the other is a new story in a regional language section. Both are stories that will end in 5 or 6 chapters. While posting I will definitely not keep anyone of you waiting like it was in the case of No One Dies a Saint or Knowing... series. I have committed myself not to keep any readers here for my next stories.


Once again, thank you Lollobionda, and all other readers for the comments, thoughts, all you've shared here. There's nothing more delightful than seeing new comments here whenever I come back. 

Keep reading, and keep posting.

Welcome back and eagerly waiting for your new story. 
About the ending for the present story, I would say the below-
1. The ending was the same as the first iteration in which Meera blamed herself for the reason for separating.
2. The climax sex scene in the penultimate episode is the same as the one with Das in which it was aimed to humiliate Krish.

Maybe you can let the couple live separately for a while and then reconcile or change the ending itself in which Meera chooses Desai over Krish and explains to Krish how she fell in love with Desai.

I hope you will come up with a different ending and add a bit more conversation between the couple in the last episode.