03-09-2023, 03:51 PM
(30-08-2023, 06:47 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: Welcome back. It was a damm hot & wet dream.Thank you.
(30-08-2023, 10:49 PM)sri7869 Wrote: Good UpdateThanks
(30-08-2023, 11:10 PM)a2011 Wrote: Great update...Thanks
(31-08-2023, 02:32 AM)madhus369 Wrote: Such an awesome piece of writing. This is erotic literature at one of its best. I have never read a better piece of cheating sex than this. Kudos. Pls continue like this here or in other stories.Thank you. Unfortunately there would be more than the three characters. A long story would not be sustainable with just the three people. All others who come in would be someway connected to the three main characters and would contribute to the story. With just three people there are chances for it to become repetitive and somewhat boring.
By the way, I just realized that is a translation of your story in Tamil. My suggestion would be to limit the characters to just these three and not go too sideways... and also avoid the downer ending. That will be more upbeat and have more fun.
(01-09-2023, 05:22 AM)a2011 Wrote: Looking forward to the next updateHave it here now.
(02-09-2023, 07:15 AM)Losliyafan Wrote: Awesome updateThank you
(02-09-2023, 09:28 AM)Paty@123 Wrote: Waiting for next part
Posting it now.