27-08-2023, 07:30 AM
Wondering how they will move ahead like earlier it was marriage function but now they either will have to go outside or take risk to meet at her house.I suggest you to kindly make a scene wherein they meet in some type 1 quarter of a peon where arrangements won't be very good...like a creaking bed a plastic chair and will be a bit smelly too but they won't care about it...you are a master story writer....depicts the emotions so well that one could feel they are the characters....your another story where mounika and a younger guy was too erotic....hope to get more such moments...i also would like to chat with you...wish u well