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Adultery Mrs.Roshni Teen Buddhon ke Jaal Mein Phasi Husn Ki Pari
(22-08-2023, 09:49 PM)JGauravbaba Wrote: Shanthi ji inka bolna b sahi hai..... Aur apka story ko plot Krna b sahi hai......but story ko jyda plot krne se story me excitement khatam hojata hai.......ab isi kahani me dekh lijiye...... Already jitne character apne introduce kiye hai.... Unke sath to rupali ka kuch grand masti karao.... But aur naye naye cameo characters ap la rhe ho.....apke is update ko padne se pehle mene iski length dekhi.... Lga bahut bda update hai to pakka kuch mazzedar hoga..... But jb pada......... To bilkul normal update lga.......I hope ap samjhengi.
Noted. Lekin plot is also important. Also roshni ki aag bhadkane ke liye in side charachters ka importance hain. Roshni in sab se prabhavit hokar aage teeno buddhon ke saath hi puri masti karegi .. uski fikar na kariye.
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RE: Mrs.Roshni Teen Buddhon ke Jaal Mein Phasi Husn Ki Pari - by ShanthifrmSingapore - 25-08-2023, 01:20 PM



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