Adultery He, She, Husband (Completed)

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Don't think any one was interested about the background story of Vikram , This updates and possibly the next one has broken the flow of the story

yeah, my suggestion would be to focus on bhavani n vikram's affair n its impact on the husband than on the characters backstories...

I agree.. this is just unnecessary diversion from the good going story.. plz focus on bhavani.. Vikram and husband without any background..

100% agree
We all know by now, Vikram has a great tool and uses it to give at most pleasure. His background not adding much.

This is a rewriting of my story from Tamil so I was following more or less the original plot. I felt a little background of Vikram was necessary. From how he is now, originally he was just like any other young man with same likes, dislikes etc. Contrary to his image now initially he too floundered in sex as any inexperienced young man would. It was to show that he was not all shallow in character and his behaviour was shaped by these events. It will be important to validate how he behaves at the climax of this story.  If many feel this detracts from the main plot I could shorten this portion but would still have to write about some of the events that had happened.