08-08-2023, 03:03 PM
(06-08-2023, 11:48 PM)a2011 Wrote: waiting for the next chapter, awesome writing.Thank you, just finished an update
(07-08-2023, 10:29 AM)Chandan Wrote: superb writing skillThank you.
(07-08-2023, 11:57 AM)kumar77717 Wrote: superb update as usual , Thanks.Thank you
(07-08-2023, 12:22 PM)samcoolpatil007 Wrote: Now the real story starts... Very eager to know what happens next.. please post next update soon...Thank you, just finished the next update.
(08-08-2023, 12:15 AM)hero123p Wrote: Awesome update.Bavani is thinking this is going to be one big sex adventure and a one off thing. Her inner wants have been given free rein, can she now pull it back? The end will show what awaits everyone for their actions.
Bhavani is behaving like a perfect slut. She has no guilt and sleeping peacefully as if nothing happened. She is a perfect partner for Vikram. They both are made for each other. While Bhavani does not care about others (her husband) when it comes to her pleasure, Vikram goes one step further and takes pleasure in others pain. They both high libido as well. They will make a perfect couple I think. They can show heaven and hell to each other. Let see how it goes.
Poor husband, he is exactly in situation which Vikram wanted. Neither he knows full truth nor he can ask Bhavani. He is going to suffer big time.
One thing I always like in your story you balance everything at the end. So hopefully husband find his peace at the end.
(08-08-2023, 11:53 AM)Ramesh_Rocky Wrote: Hi game40itVikram wants to feel superior for that he has to flaunt to the husband that he had seduced and slept with his wife but he cannot to that primarily because of the consequence for the wife. So, the next best think is to create this doubt in the mind of the husband.
She - she just tasted the forbidden fruit and enjoyed the taste of it fully. Now she not even feel guilty for the illicit affire. She is a slut.
Husband - he fooled by his wife and betrayed, lied, manipulated, cheated. Let's see how strong and brave he is.
He - he got what he wants and how he wants it. He seems to enjoy others suffering and pain more than sex.
Thank you for the update.