29-07-2023, 07:03 PM
Dude you are an amazing writer hands down!!!
Make it as slow burner as you can but seductive as well
If you would upload images then it would be a lot erotic to what it is now!!
Make the couple more passionate especially the woman, by adding more dialogues on her part
And add their secret outings where vikram is asking her to give BJ's thereby cumming in her mouth or fuck her from behind
And lastly when the story will go in its climax, make her pregnant and emotional about the affair hence it will led head her to make a choice, and the end will be upto you..
Make it as slow burner as you can but seductive as well
If you would upload images then it would be a lot erotic to what it is now!!
Make the couple more passionate especially the woman, by adding more dialogues on her part
And add their secret outings where vikram is asking her to give BJ's thereby cumming in her mouth or fuck her from behind
And lastly when the story will go in its climax, make her pregnant and emotional about the affair hence it will led head her to make a choice, and the end will be upto you..
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