29-07-2023, 06:23 PM
(28-07-2023, 08:05 PM)fasterboy Wrote: I hope husband would caught their sexual liaison very soon and story must progress with emotion drama too.
it becomes soon boring like many of Indian threads where wife fucks her lover or lovers while husband stays within few meter radius distance and this goes for months and husband never found about. it's quite illogical. that difference I found between indian threads and literotica.
However indian threads fall under adultery category while I think that all falls under erotic coupling category.
(28-07-2023, 10:00 PM)abhinay67 Wrote: yes, repeated sex has becoming boring , let husband found out and let bhavani make a choice between husband or vikram
If I were to go this way then this story would finish in two or three updates at most. Is that what most of the readers want? If so I can finish it that way. I know that most of the stories here portrays the husband as a spineless coward meekly accepting his wife's adulterous behavior or clueless fools who are totally unaware being humiliated by their wives. Of course the third category is the husband gladly welcomes becoming a cuckold. How did you come to the conclusion that my story would follow one of the above patterns?
There would be repeated episodes of coupling between the lover and the wife, that can't be helped as it is the nature of the story. How far into depravity would she go? What nefarious plans would the lover come up with to continue to enjoy the wife? What actions would the husband take? What are the consequences that everyone of them have to face? These all form part of the story that I had already written earlier in Tamil. If this is not what the readers want or if it does not interest them then I will rework the current episode I am writing so that the story can come to a swift conclusion.
It is left to what the readers really want.