[Mf123]

I feel you are writing a story which is going to be one of the masterpiece. My suggestion to you would be:

Don't get overwhelmed or underwhelmed by the comments
Don't hurry yourself in writing the chapters
Don't follow the suggestions from the comments
Write it in your own style

I have seen a lot of stories getting stopped from the above reasons. At one point the authors get obsessed with the story that they reach a point where they could not continue it. Please don't stop this. Keep a good ending in mind ready with you even if it's going to end in another 5 or 100 chapters