27-07-2023, 07:46 PM
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(27-07-2023, 03:22 PM)game40it Wrote: Thank you.
I know that particular episode would seem repetitious. You must remember that I had already written this episode in the Tamil version and I didn't want to change it though of course I could have just written they had another round of sex before Vikram left and then gone on to the next chapter. Also I wanted to establish how much Vikram desired Bavani that he was sated with enjoying her once or twice but he wanted her more and more. So much so he could perform many times with her in the short time available. Remember all this happened between somewhere close to twelve midnight and three in the morning. Criticism was fair but I just wanted you all to know my thinking.
Fair enough,
Lets see how it goes Next.
Close encounters [almost getting caught] are more thrilling always.