27-07-2023, 03:22 PM
(25-07-2023, 02:33 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Sensational.....Thank you.
Superb.....
(25-07-2023, 02:44 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: No No Author:I know that particular episode would seem repetitious. You must remember that I had already written this episode in the Tamil version and I didn't want to change it though of course I could have just written they had another round of sex before Vikram left and then gone on to the next chapter. Also I wanted to establish how much Vikram desired Bavani that he was sated with enjoying her once or twice but he wanted her more and more. So much so he could perform many times with her in the short time available. Remember all this happened between somewhere close to twelve midnight and three in the morning. Criticism was fair but I just wanted you all to know my thinking.
Now it is just repeated sex with no disturbances.
Fucking for so long with no disturbance? Hubby still not woken up?
NO NO NO
(25-07-2023, 10:18 PM)fasterboy Wrote: Same thought thereRefer above in my response to Givemeextra
(26-07-2023, 01:16 AM)Mehndi 99 Wrote: Excellent update as usual...Bavani is fast turning into a slut...let us see what sexy attire she wears for the next days marriage party...I am sincerely hoping for a daringly low saree below her deep navel and a complete backless blouse with loads of jewellery...and wearing that, Bavani will have a dirty sex when the actual marriage is going on...and hoping to see Bavani becomes a cum slut in the future as well for her loverThere won't be an after wedding party but things that you wanted may be in the future episodes.
(26-07-2023, 02:50 PM)UOOZEE123452845 Wrote: Exactly what I was thinkingRefer to response to Givemeextra.
(26-07-2023, 08:34 PM)Gopal Ratnam Wrote: AwesomeThank you.