[Mak060758]

Dear friend, 

I welcome your opinion. 

All my stories are not like this. I tried a different scope in this story. Every character shows different kind  emotions and feelings for each action and reaction. I want to narrate each character emotions from the character side. I will complete the story like this. Sorry.

What I wrote was my opinion. My view.  NO OFFENCE MEANT.  Your story..your wish. I fully respect that.  In fact, there are two sisters and one brother and mom and dad.  There is so much scope in these characters to write even 1000 pages.  Go ahead. I will still try to read.