12-07-2023, 04:54 PM
(10-07-2023, 06:07 PM)kumar77717 Wrote: Absolutely brilliant buddy, you are a very talented narrator , while reading it seems that the scene is happening in front of us, keep up the good work dear.Thank you. I believe that giving details adds flavor to the story. Good to know that it is appreciated.
(10-07-2023, 06:56 PM)Givemeextra Wrote:
(10-07-2023, 07:52 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: Just wonderful. Simple Wonderful.A woman who cheats also somehow loses any inhibitions she may have or display with her husband. Thank you for your comments.
Would have loved her feeding that strong MAN sample to her hubby - Like mixing it with some sweat milk or something.
Request for more exposure scenes - especially with hubby nearby. That would be exciting.
Just Imagine the Lust she must be having - to do such things like nipple sucking of her lover.
Pure Lust - Pure Sin - Beautiful
(11-07-2023, 12:45 PM)Lovecraft Wrote: You are doing an outstanding job.Thank you. Words of appreciation such as yours serves as motivation to try and do the best I can.
I must say that your writing skills are exceptional,
And your way of narration is fabulous.
(12-07-2023, 02:15 AM)Mehndi 99 Wrote: fantastic update...and Bavani intentionally wearing low saree in public to show her lover her paunchy creamy belly and a lovely belly button makes it even more appealing...kudos to you to make this a erotic story of the highest order ....and finally the subjugation of a beautiful and married mother who bends and takes her lover's cock in her mouth to give pleasure to her lover knowing fully well that her husband is around is the piece de resistance ...excellent writing skills....finally when bavani takes the cum in her mouth and swallows and still is happy about it is just more icing that can be possible on the top of your lovely cake....mind blowing update...Thank you. When lust starts dominating and desire for a man increases a woman becomes more daring than usual. She would do everything to keep the interest of the man and would want to please him in any way she could.
(12-07-2023, 05:09 AM)Ramesh_Rocky Wrote: Really good update and thanks for your efforts.Thank you. Appreciate your continued support.
(12-07-2023, 12:19 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Amazing writing skills....
The best of part of your writing is that you keep narrating the incidents from female point of view....
Keeping the husband and He pov short is i personally admire the most.....
Keep Rocking....
You are One of the best in telling erotica...
Thank you. Though a substantial part of the story will be told in the woman's point of view, when it warrants the male parts of the narrative would be lengthy too.