09-07-2023, 07:25 PM
(08-07-2023, 02:14 AM)Mehndi 99 Wrote: super excellent update...makes us panting for more....and the small few sucks by Bavani on her lover's cock makes us wonder what eroticism and sex that is coming up in the next updates ...too goodThank you. All this is leading to Bavani giving her priced chastity to the young hunk. The pleasure is for He and She, the pain for the Husband.
(08-07-2023, 04:05 AM)Ramesh_Rocky Wrote: Hi game40it,Thank you. In between the sex I also tried to convey the feelings, hopes and fears of all the three people in this sexual triangle. The Husband character would be as you wanted.
Wonderful and erotic beginning. Reading Vikram and Bhavani incedents are so good.
Mohan insecurity and Vikram confidence and Bhavani lust evidence for what coming in their life.
One request please don't make the husband a big simp.
Keep up the good work looking forward to read upcoming updates.
Thank you.
(08-07-2023, 07:20 AM)Rangushki Wrote: FantasticThank You.
(08-07-2023, 03:05 PM)kumar77717 Wrote: you really rock buddy, eagerly waiting for your next update.Thank You. Working on it. Very soon.
(08-07-2023, 06:17 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: Ah, waiting for the evening's events. As the Groom/Bride enjoy their movement, hope to see:As you had wanted that would happen.
> Movements from Bavani towards Vikram. Bavani somehow trying to avoid hubby and tying to go with Vikram
> Almost getting caught from Hubby and managing. Many Close calls but Bavani somehow manages
(08-07-2023, 06:31 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: Thinking, can there be a situation where:I put it as this happening in a small town, the hometown of the bride, where the father is the bigshot there. Though a lot of people from the city are there attending the wedding a thing like a married woman going away with an unmarried young man would be a scandalous shock. It not something they would engage in. The lovers getting together would have to be behind every ones back. I had already written this story in Tamil and the main scenes unfolding follows from that though I also have made substantial changes here in the English version.
> Hubby himself getting into situation where he sends Bavani with Vikram
> Hubby tense knowing he sending sheep with wolf but unable to avoid circumstances
> He somehow tries to deny first, even gives eye/word hints towards Bavani not going, Uses their son as means to stop Bavani - but crowd, Vikram and finally Bavani herself not caring of Hubby
> Only Hubby/Vikram and Bavani knows what Hubby means. Bavani acts casual as if she does not know anything
Vikram thanks Hubby for sending Bavani to help. Bavani thanks hubby for sending Vikram for help.
Hubby getting tension and blood pressure high high high but Bavani/Vikram are into their own sinful thoughts and don't bother
Hubby baby sitting their son while Vikram does some amount of xxx's with his wife
(08-07-2023, 07:41 PM)abhinay67 Wrote: Bhavani will fuck Vikram for sure, She is already not satisfied with his husband and want someone better and good-looking. Only a matter of time before Vikram fucks her and makes her pregnant before eventully leaving her as he has already mentioned his plans.The first part of your view will certainly happen though the latter part may not be exactly so.
(08-07-2023, 08:32 PM)Susheela143 Wrote: FantasticThank you
(09-07-2023, 09:45 AM)Mampi Wrote: super writing skillThank You
(09-07-2023, 12:30 PM)circbram Wrote: Awesome update !!!
Thank You
I have almost finished my next update, just got to write a little more and then go through it for any changes that strikes me and for corrections. I would probably post it later in the evening, maybe in two or three hours time. Thank you all for taking the time to comment and encouraging me.