04-07-2023, 11:22 PM
(02-07-2023, 03:22 PM)Susheela143 Wrote: Fantastic narration bossThank you
(02-07-2023, 04:04 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: WOW, What a narration.
By reading the update, I can feel as if, I am one of the invisible audience there silently observing Hubby, wifey and Vikram all at same time.
Excellent narration. Keep it up.
Now with Hubby again going out, what more chances can come about. Oh the wait for next update.
(02-07-2023, 04:10 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: Thank you.I try to be as descriptive as possible so a picture is formed in the readers mind. Thank you for telling me I am succeeding to some extent. I will see how it goes as far as your suggestion is concerned.
At least my scenario 2 seems fair, but you are the rightful person to decide and proceed.
Thank you for entertaining us readers with each fantastic update.
(02-07-2023, 06:57 PM)Dinesh Raveendran Wrote: Super narrationThank You
(03-07-2023, 11:08 AM)cicbram Wrote: Awesome Story telling !!!Thank you. I try to be as descriptive as possible
Your words paint a picture while reading
(03-07-2023, 03:05 PM)kumar77717 Wrote: superb narration, eagerly wating for the next update.Thank you
(04-07-2023, 06:37 AM)Karmayogee Wrote: super
Thanks