Adultery He, She, Husband (Completed)

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Excellent!..  This was the change from Tamil version I was hoping for.. Now Bhavani and Vikram can do the future things like its the first time.. Keep going like this, bro.. You are doing great!

Yes, I did the changes, luckily this won't affect the narration so much on the parts I already wrote in Tamil. I just have to make a little bit of changes here and there. 

very nice

Thanks

Erotic seduction, nice !!!

Thank you

The turbulence going in Bavani's mind right now.  The last para summarizes it well

Unfortunately as we know, the mind only wins post the heart. 

Bavani's heart is beating faster, her pussy wetter, her body hotter - deadly combo with no place for rational thinking

She had been married for six years. The seventh year itch is about to start. She was already ripe for new sexual adventures. Vikram just happened to be the catalyst. 

Would love to read 

Bavani having some xxx small adventures right when hubby near her [behind his back],   like getting her :

• Boob pressed
  
• Pussy grabbed
  
• Ass thapping 
  
• Wantedly dashing on her [front or back whatever]
  
  

Each opportunity letting her feel Vikram's body and hands on her

Another scenario where Bavani's enjoys right in front of Hubby:


Some bride/groom games where Bavani is pulled in and Vikram partners her as Hubbly not there or he came late.

Some touching here/there throughout game and Hubby cant say anything as others might say something.

Vikram uses this opportunity heavily , at last stage even lifting Bavani and holding her. Hubby completely paralyzed with disgust/fear and hears others talking about how good Bavani/Vikram couple are. 

Finally Hubby seen questioning Bavani but she shuts him off saying it is his imagination and Vikram was only playing game.

Have to read what I had already written in Tamil. Will see if there is scope to incorporate any of the things you have suggested. Will certainly try to do so if possible.


Here is the balance of Chapter 4.