27-06-2023, 10:43 AM
(27-06-2023, 08:17 AM)Hellybelly Wrote: Everything is good going...I support and understand the writers capabilities.just want to add some observationsI don't agree with phrase "without even single action (apart from husband). He's almost getting handjobs hidden in public and giving her the groping of a lifetime.
Anita has became bolder in this version.
Story Has achieved more eroticism without even single action(apart from husband).
Presence of jeetu is badly needed, as he has a unique way of doing things and he is more apt for servant role rather some macho man.
I hope Anita's visit to Village will open new secret stories of adultery which she'll witness in village, maybe she met someone there..........who knows
Last thing, kindly update frequently, if not possible then plz update the 2,3 part at a time which would complete a session and readers also will not demand more.
Also, the village invitation... I don't think it is about going to the village.