27-06-2023, 08:17 AM
Everything is good going...I support and understand the writers capabilities.just want to add some observations
Anita has became bolder in this version.
Story Has achieved more eroticism without even single action(apart from husband).
Presence of jeetu is badly needed, as he has a unique way of doing things and he is more apt for servant role rather some macho man.
I hope Anita's visit to Village will open new secret stories of adultery which she'll witness in village, maybe she met someone there..........who knows
Last thing, kindly update frequently, if not possible then plz update the 2,3 part at a time which would complete a session and readers also will not demand more.
Anita has became bolder in this version.
Story Has achieved more eroticism without even single action(apart from husband).
Presence of jeetu is badly needed, as he has a unique way of doing things and he is more apt for servant role rather some macho man.
I hope Anita's visit to Village will open new secret stories of adultery which she'll witness in village, maybe she met someone there..........who knows
Last thing, kindly update frequently, if not possible then plz update the 2,3 part at a time which would complete a session and readers also will not demand more.