25-06-2023, 11:48 PM
(22-06-2023, 08:17 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: Yet again, what a excellent update.Yes, the sex between them doesn't happen quickly. The seduction will continue to take some time.
What a episode - Encounter's [touches now common, ass being explored by a thick shaft]---Bavani's dream sequence at end
Repped you again. Pls never stop writing.
1 kind request: pls take it a bit slower in next episode. Seduction situations more important than sex.
(22-06-2023, 08:21 PM)Givemeextra Wrote:She is slowly moving towards losing her cherished chastity to Vikram.
She has decided to get fucked by Vikram....Even if it is in front of her husband
Yeah, her body heat is rising dangerously
(23-06-2023, 12:41 AM)Mehndi 99 Wrote: excellent update....waiting for more...btw, is Bavani wearing low saree below her navel and skimpy blouse ? otherwise how could vikram see her hips ....very well written, you have a flair for writing erotica....keep goingI really didn't describe how Bavani was dressed. Left it to the readers imagination.
(23-06-2023, 05:06 PM)circbram Wrote: Awesome update !!!Thank you. Good that the story gives you joy.
Literally have to hold my cock which reading ur stories!!
As always
Keep it Cumming!!!
(23-06-2023, 06:46 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: In last update, felt 2 things could have come:Vikram had to be circumspect when all the people were around. He was at that time not sure how she would react and therefore didn't want to risk it.
Vikram should have grabbed and squeezed her ass making Bavani shout in pleasurable pain. While others enquire why/what and while her hubby hears and comes in, Vvikram should be leaving the area
In that wild dream of hers, Vikram should have sprayed her face/hair/boobs/belly/thighs etc with his piss ..Also including her bed and floor's below. Marking as his area as Hubby watches in vain. Bavani laughing at it
Hope to see:
> Bavani lowering her saree willingly to expose her navel to Vikram. He should poke his finger into her deep navel triggering her heights of pleasure
> More and More Dicking by Vikram
> Some direct Bavani/Virkam dash dash where in Bavani's breasts gets crushed when hitting Vikram's Chest
Anyway Looks Author know's what he is doing.
Thanks
(23-06-2023, 07:03 PM)Hotyyhard Wrote: awesomeThanks
(24-06-2023, 09:10 AM)Sakshi Priyan Wrote: very niceThanks
(24-06-2023, 10:51 AM)Givemeextra Wrote: Bavani might lower her saree - yes
But Skimpy blouse - Doubt her husband would allow her to wear that. He is busy trying to protect her from 1 Vikram.
Imagine, if 10 Vikram came seeing her skimpy blouse.
Seeing Bavani's masturbation - she will allow Vikram to see her hips and then extend his hands into other parts of her body for sure.
Time will tell how Bavani would change over time.