20-06-2023, 07:12 PM
Maine Ek chesta ki ,kahanil likhne ki - kahani nahi , mere abubhavon ki
Maine pahle hi kaha tha - ye mera pahla anubhav hai ,simple way me hi Likh paungi .
Abhi to sirf 4 post diye hai ,aur abhi paha anubhav hua bhi nahi
Aur 23-24 anubhav likhne hain mujhe .
Lekin lagta hai , kisi ko pasand nahi aa rahi
Padha to 665 sadasyon ne , lekin kisi ne kuchi koi comment nahi kiya .
Likhne se samajh me aata -- ki pasanad aa rahi hai ya mujhe meri lekhni me kuch sudhar ki jarurat hai
Maine pahle hi kaha tha - ye mera pahla anubhav hai ,simple way me hi Likh paungi .
Abhi to sirf 4 post diye hai ,aur abhi paha anubhav hua bhi nahi
Aur 23-24 anubhav likhne hain mujhe .
Lekin lagta hai , kisi ko pasand nahi aa rahi
Padha to 665 sadasyon ne , lekin kisi ne kuchi koi comment nahi kiya .
Likhne se samajh me aata -- ki pasanad aa rahi hai ya mujhe meri lekhni me kuch sudhar ki jarurat hai