16-06-2023, 11:10 PM
(15-06-2023, 03:15 PM)Givemeextra Wrote: If you are writing so well in English, I am sure your Tamil works would have been even better.Actually I struggle more in Tamil. It's easier for me in English.
THANK YOU SO MUCH, BLESS YOU FOR THIS SOCIAL SERVICE.
Repped You.
* Must learn Tamil this year at least , Any suggestions for online free classes?
(16-06-2023, 01:12 AM)Desmond Miles Wrote: Great start and an awesome narration, bro.. Hope it goes beyond our imaginations.. It surely has the potential to be a hit story..I had forgotten what I had written as it was some time ago except for the outline of the story. I am translating as I read the Tamil version. There are changes here and there in this version. I haven't read what you were referring to and I don't have recollection of what I had written either. When I come to the point I'll keep your suggestion in mind and see what I can do.
Reps added.. Keep going.. All the very best!
Also, a small request.. just read some parts of the tamil version now. If you can, please change the first attempt by Vikram on her while drying the clothes. Like he don't directly talk about wanting her. But nature take the motion on its own (like in the crowded area before). Hope you understand..
(16-06-2023, 07:41 AM)Susheela143 Wrote: Fantastic beginning, pl continue and try to post big update pl
I'll try but I will try posting more frequently if I can't make it big updates.