16-06-2023, 01:12 AM
(This post was last modified: 16-06-2023, 03:01 AM by Desmond Miles. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Great start and an awesome narration, bro.. Hope it goes beyond our imaginations.. It surely has the potential to be a hit story..
Reps added.. Keep going.. All the very best!
Also, a small request.. just read some parts of the tamil version now. If you can, please change the first attempt by Vikram on her while drying the clothes. Like he don't directly talk about wanting her. But nature take the motion on its own (like in the crowded area before). Hope you understand..
Reps added.. Keep going.. All the very best!
Also, a small request.. just read some parts of the tamil version now. If you can, please change the first attempt by Vikram on her while drying the clothes. Like he don't directly talk about wanting her. But nature take the motion on its own (like in the crowded area before). Hope you understand..