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13-06-2023, 11:27 PM

(13-06-2023, 04:57 AM)TheCaptain1983 Wrote: Good story. You could have stopped on the positive note...
Why did you need to end the story with those two last lines with sad/bad incidents...???

I didnt put them intentionally
While i observed the story after writing the ending episode

I realised i gave so much healthy messages, which i avoid mostly

The last lines were added, so that story will be true to human emotions & Nature.. As our regular surroundings & as daily going news..

Thankyou very much
Aye aye captain

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