08-06-2023, 02:32 PM
(08-06-2023, 02:05 PM)adipop Wrote: Great update brother hope we don't have to wait long for the next chapter
One more thing when you started this story it was perfect so kindly go back to hinglish( Hindi + English ) let rasul converse with purva in Hindi you can put.the translated conversation in brackets for readers who don't understand Hindi as it will add an extra layer of masala to the story for example (rasul calling purva a raand or chinaal in Hindi while he is Boning her sounds better than him calling her a whore or a harlot it's a personal opinion so if you feel like me than kindly add these changes to make your story even more intriguing.