Misc. Erotica Indian wife plays with construction workers (how it should have ended)
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(08-06-2023, 02:05 PM)adipop Wrote: Great update brother hope we don't have to wait long for the next chapter

One more thing when you started this story it was perfect  so kindly go back to hinglish( Hindi + English ) let rasul converse with purva in Hindi you can put.the translated conversation in brackets for readers who don't understand Hindi as it will add an extra layer of masala to the story  for example (rasul  calling purva  a raand or chinaal in Hindi while he  is Boning her  sounds better than him calling her a whore  or  a harlot  it's a personal opinion so if you  feel like me than kindly add these changes to make your story even more intriguing.
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RE: Indian wife plays with construction workers (how it should have ended) - by adipop - 08-06-2023, 02:32 PM



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