02-05-2023, 04:45 PM
(02-05-2023, 01:36 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Great writing .....
I request you to take it further as it is entirely different plot you created.....
Abhi tak jo bhi huwa wo female lead character ke man ke bina hua....Ab unhe emotionally involve kariye....
Brilliant story plot hai aur jab aap likhoge to awesome ho jaayegi....
Rest is your decision.....
Yes mai bhi jaldbazi mai aage. Nahi badana chahata tha ...isiliye maine use roka aur end hi samjho kara