01-05-2023, 03:01 PM
Sean, your writing is just amazing & what makes it even more amazing is that you are treating all the characters as normal human beings like introducing Chanda, although she would have a greater purpose to solve but still they way you introduced her is greater or displaying that scuffle between two auto drivers for Anita and a third auto driver being scared to give her a ride because it's not her route is amazing. Also I remember in your previous version Anita and Hariya were having Ice creams where Hariya was having a cup ice cream and Anita a stick ice cream and the way you explained the entire scene was just breathtaking and now they have started having ice creams together so I am eagerly waiting for that scene again......
All the best for your future updates
All the best for your future updates