Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

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Like RCF has mentioned, I'm also emotionally exhausted, my friend. You know the feeling when the world cup is over, you no longer want to watch any other match of the same sport. So it will take a while before I rewrite that chapter. I think a little bit of time will do good for everyone.

Hi krish_999,

I visit the website just for reading stories and it is embarrassing to say that I don't comment a lot. However, after reading this story , I was not able to hold myself. This story is one of the masterpieces that I have ever come across. It definitely falls into the category like "Who Watches the Watchman" on this forum , "Wicked Desire" which I read on Kindle by Vikrant Roy and few others. 

As lot of people have already given their critical review about characters  , I will rather keep it short. I liked Meera and Krish as a couple , even though there are several flaws in their personality. Desai for me is not a bad character, but, he has strong liking for Meera and what the couple did to take their fantasy ahead, Desai has all the right to steal her from krish by exploiting the slippery slope of "CUCKOLDING". But as it is "Meera is eventually there for/With Krish", their love for each other is non-negotiable and I am happy that it ended on a positive note. The sad end of the story would have left me personally heart broken (Someone whose "love of life" ,my GF, left me for other guy (NOT BECAUSE OF CUCKOLD FANTASY.LOL) , I always prefer to read  such story with happy ending. I almost stopped reading story after Chapter 41, when I felt this will end in heartbreak only to continue when chapter 42 was updated and after taking a sneak and  realising, it is happy ending   .

Now coming to erotica as this website demands and some critical review.

1. Like many other readers I felt that you had already made your mind to finish the story and it was ended in haste. 
2. Since you already brought the idea of Desai visiting Himanchal and Shimoga with Meera, I thought story could have been taken in direction where, Meera had given a try to spend sometime with him to figure out if her new relationship is workable. Meanwhile, she would have still not  forget Krish completely and her love for him  been intact.
3. At the same time, Krish would have shown his strong character and exploited flings of Desai, to win back Meera eventually. 
4. Meanwhile you could have included some more steamy scenes and dialogues(In Himachal and Shimoga) to give the story a proper treat of being an Erotica. 


Having said, what I have to, I think it is completely a prerogative of author where and how he wants to end the story. My wish is still that you may probably add 1-2 more chapters with alternate ending once you can get some zeal back to review the current ending. I am not in favour of adding any new series in the storyline or anyone writing a sequel as it does nothing good but make the story boring.

Last but never the least. TAKE A BOW FOR THIS MASTERPIECE