09-04-2023, 05:07 AM
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(25-03-2023, 01:34 AM)Desmond Miles Wrote: It was a great story..(didn't like the turnover that Colonel directly doing tricks with Sanjeev though tbh, but still was going great after that)
Thinking of continuing this story with the way I wished it had moved further.
Also, I ask you guys if anyone have read the remaining of the original story, please give some ideas how it actually went after that. Can develop a great continuation with that thread and inputs by you.
Lets see where it leads..
I vaguely remember but tbh nothing interesting happens. As I remember colonel tries to put crack in their marriage by convincing Payal that Sanjeev is cheating on her. Sanjeev gets kidnap and Payal tries to save Sanjeev by allowing Colonel to have her body but then security officer arrives etc etc. I really didn't like the ending (FYI I don't even care about Pankaj part).
My recommendation would be to pick up from the end of the walk with colonel part.