08-04-2023, 08:12 AM
(07-04-2023, 09:42 PM)pinkbaby Wrote: idea to aap acha dy rahy ho bhaai ............ lakin kuch dost kahty chahty hain ky Neha siraf aor siraf Cheddi laal ki rahy ...... aor koi aor usy naa chooy ..........
aor koi kahta hai ky woh aor bhi logo ki khushi ka karan bany
ab aap hi btaao na ky Neha bechaari kyaa kry ..........
Neha aakhir kis ki baat maany .....
yeh to mushkil ho raha hai na Neha ky ly na
kya bolty ho aap
pinkbaby
There are all suggestions. you should write what you think is best for the story afterall its your story.