30-03-2023, 04:55 PM
(30-03-2023, 11:10 AM)raajrohit66 Wrote: Es topic par sabi apni suggestions den... Taaki mai kahani aage likh sakun....Jaise ki yeh story ek cuckold/voyeur drishtikon se ab tak chali aa rhi hai or sabhi pathak isi interest mei read karte hain aur story bhi bhot acchi chal rhi hai iss drishtikon se. Story ki main drishtikon ko badalne par readers ki interest kam/khatam ho sakti hai. Mera suggestions yehi rahega ki story ki main drishtikon ko change na kiya jaye. Or ankush ko thoda aur involve karein as a cuckold/voyeur.