Adultery மகளிர் தினம்

[Nandhinii Aaryan]

Na Romba rowdy paiyan

Hi Nandhini

To you,

1. Too early to ask suggestions, your story is shaping up, stage is being set, the characters are just getting to know each other.

2. As a reader we still don't know much about your characters that much to say something.

3. Continue what ever you are doing, your viewers are increasing, so what ever you are writing, people are liking.

To story

1.So the boy white shirt and blue jeans, has charm. Not a prick, steady minded. He is planning, and executing very well. Nothing about him is casual, all planned out.

2.Can't believe that Nandhini is completely avoided by his husband, poor girl. So his husband is definitely a dickhead.

3. Nandhini needs some company, but why to complicate the things. This can be a fling, she can have casual sex. But getting emotionally involved??? Don't know how she will be benefitted.

தொடருங்கள்

I have already mentioned Nandhini Character Writting In 2nd Episode and Also mentioned why her husband completely avoided her

Nandhini have lot of desires which her husband not fulfilled not sex