BHAGYABAN BUDDHE

[Wtf99]

I expected more likes and comments but I disheartened to see low response. To write a big update long time is needed . But no matter I will give a very hot big update soon . Stay connected. Thanks

Nothing much had happened in the story yet. Your set up and characters are top notch. But now smth needs to happen. You're taking too long to set things up but nothing worthwhile is happening. Also some of your updates have decent length, the others look like micro dicks. So be consistent in your updating and write long updates with proper groping or sexual action in them. Then expect proper response. I sometimes check out your story but your inconsistency has put me off from commenting. So write better and even I'll give proper comments and likes on your updates.