11-03-2023, 04:17 PM
(11-03-2023, 04:09 PM)abcturbine Wrote: You are gifted writer.....
I personally suggest you to take the story further as you think best.....You can entertain the request of the readers but please don't be in hurry to fulfill every demand...
Take the story slow and seductive....
Include emotional introspection of female lead character....
Try to focus on one male character
Thanks... that's type of deatiled comments .... really appreciate me