07-03-2023, 03:52 PM
Na romba nalla paiyan
Hello writer, first few chapters were fine, in terms of story, and how it is written. But last few chapters were bakwaas, story is ok, what about the language, bhad mein gaya. Cheap english, takes the interest out of the reader's. Are there two authors? Manjulikha and Anjulikha??? Kya huva beti or beta?? Kisse pattah..
Any ways story is good, nithya and imran, good chemistry between them. Keep this as an Adultery.
Hello writer, first few chapters were fine, in terms of story, and how it is written. But last few chapters were bakwaas, story is ok, what about the language, bhad mein gaya. Cheap english, takes the interest out of the reader's. Are there two authors? Manjulikha and Anjulikha??? Kya huva beti or beta?? Kisse pattah..
Any ways story is good, nithya and imran, good chemistry between them. Keep this as an Adultery.
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