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Adultery Ek bangali poribar er itikotha
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(07-03-2023, 10:00 AM)Sherlocked Wrote: Ei golpo ta amar besh kichu ta already lekha hoye ache. Tai majh pothe theme ta change korte hole onek tai edit korte lagbe. Tachara ami jebhabe bhebechi golpo ta seta ekjon saririk bhabe otripto grihobodhu poristhitir swikar hoye onar borer bhaipo r sathe ekta oboidho somporke joriye pore. Ar sumu character tao ekta khub e sadharon character, kono playboy na. Or prothom attempt e moi debi songo na diye ekta jore thappor mere thamiye dito, se hoy to ar lojja te tar jethur bari te ar konodin asto na, jor kore onake kora to porer byapar. 
Jaihok, apnar suggestion ta ami dekhechi, jodi bhobissot e kichu likhi mathay rakhbo. Onek dhonnyobad porar jonno ebong feedback deoar jonno.
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Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by Sherlocked - 01-03-2023, 03:20 PM
Chapter 1 - by Sherlocked - 01-03-2023, 03:21 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 02-03-2023, 07:36 AM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 05-03-2023, 10:23 AM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by Dushtuchele567 - 07-03-2023, 10:44 AM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 08-03-2023, 07:05 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 09-03-2023, 07:15 AM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 12-03-2023, 06:37 AM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 12-03-2023, 11:10 AM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 15-03-2023, 04:04 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 20-03-2023, 05:57 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 24-03-2023, 04:40 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 28-03-2023, 08:58 AM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by Somnaath - 30-03-2023, 07:14 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 04-04-2023, 08:14 AM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 07-04-2023, 05:49 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 14-04-2023, 08:26 AM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 23-04-2023, 12:05 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by ray.rowdy - 07-05-2023, 06:05 AM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by chndnds - 26-08-2023, 02:05 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by ray.rowdy - 05-07-2024, 12:07 AM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by ray.rowdy - 07-11-2024, 11:37 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by Jm12345 - 19-11-2024, 01:45 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by Jm12345 - 29-11-2024, 01:39 PM
RE: Ek bangali poribar er itikotha - by Jm12345 - 19-12-2024, 05:18 PM



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