04-03-2023, 11:34 PM
(04-03-2023, 03:11 PM)Therocksayys Wrote: Option 1. This was such a good story but I stopped reading after the story completely diverted towards Uzra. It’s just that seeing an old woman get fucked isn’t something believable but 90% of the time not possible.
Akmas was such a solid character and she should have been fucked and used the way Uzra did.
I still believe that you are a gifted writer who can turn this story around Akmas again and she should have been the main character of this story.
We all are eagerly waiting for your return and see Akmas getting besharm and becoming gashti of the plumber and and the watchman. Can’t wait!!!!
The story was suppose to be akmas's , I wanted akmas to be the lead character of this story, one suggestion after suggestion the story automatically shifted to Uzra which truly speaking I didn't wanted to , that's how I lost my interest in it, I somehow figure in out that lot's of reader's were unhappy for ,,,me bringing Uzra into the story she was a side character from the beginning but what to say,, at last hope you people support the thread more and more to make it big, salute,,