19-02-2023, 11:55 PM
(14-02-2023, 02:38 PM)natureboyy Wrote: I'm sorry for the delay..apni job ki wajah se iss week main bohot busy hoon, likhne ka time nhi mil rha. Agla update sat ya sunday ko ayega.
update aapne accha dala hai, par sundar padhi likhi ladki hai, paise wali hai, sanskari hai, pati se pyar karti hai, to thode naaj nakhre to dikhayegi na, itti easily ramu ne peeche se pakad liya kuch nai boli, beedi pila di kuch nai boli, itti easily give up kyon karegi, aap ek baar woh story padho, banarsi panwala usme ladki kitne nakhre dikhati hai, nokjhok, dhaakka mukii, dant ti hai usmi main to maja hai itti jaldi sundar ladki nai giveup karti usko pata hai ki woh hot hai sundar hai
just a suggestion, please don't take it otherwise you are writing good