14-02-2023, 09:21 AM
(13-02-2023, 09:04 PM)Donxxx Wrote: Story ko jaldi Khatam Karne ka soch ke Aise update de rhe Ho Kya yar fir Maa ko bete ke samne chudwana chahte Ho..agar Maa ko bete ke samne chudwana chahte Ho to story update Dena band kr do Kyunki ye story Maa ko bete ke samne khulamkhula chudwane Wala nai hai.. Original author aur Usman Bhai ka 2 update padh Lo ache se uske bad update Dena, Kaisa story likha Jana chahiye pata lag jayega
O bhai har kisi ka story likhne ka tarika alag alag hota hai
Desichut aur usama bhai ka tarika alag hai
Unki thinking alag hai
Meri alag
Aur story khatam huyi kya jo itna gyan baat rhe ho bhai
Nahi khatam huyi na to jara patience rkho
Aya samaz
Meko paise nhi mil rhe yaha pe
Maibsirf fun ke liye aur public ke entertainment ke liye likh rga hu
Mere pas agle update pde h mai har 2 din me lamba update dene ki soch rha tha
Aur usi tarah se har 2 din me bada update milega
Y nhi ki story shuru kr di aur mahine mahine update nhi
To isliye bhai thodi thand rkh ayi samz