11-02-2023, 05:13 AM
Ok.
I have NOT read all of your stories. Only one - trisha maami - that too, some initial pages way some months back.
I will comment on this story alone.
The story started nice with initial minimal characters and went really good with some excellent teasing by the innocent servant to trisha. But, after some time either due to delayed updates or introducing new characters (reallly dont know), i found this story boring and avoided. ( suggestion: the story would be great if it involved only trisha and the innocent servant. because i like teasing scenes instead of only direct sex)
general suggestion - write one story, try to complete it at least with regular updates (this can be difficult and practically not possible for many users - considering personal life and personal works - to me 1st priority be family, family, family alone - next manage some time to write stories)
but not completing a story and starting a new one - i dont think it working fine.
It can be just some stupid things i wrote above -- because end of the day, I am only a reader not a writer (i dont know anything about the difficulties of a writer in setting up characters, writing story and making the readers stick to it)
i came to this website during lockdown (some months back) and following some long stories, thats all.
I read some stories and I request updates to those stories which I find quite interesting.
I spent time to read stories and that's all my contribution here
I have NOT read all of your stories. Only one - trisha maami - that too, some initial pages way some months back.
I will comment on this story alone.
The story started nice with initial minimal characters and went really good with some excellent teasing by the innocent servant to trisha. But, after some time either due to delayed updates or introducing new characters (reallly dont know), i found this story boring and avoided. ( suggestion: the story would be great if it involved only trisha and the innocent servant. because i like teasing scenes instead of only direct sex)
general suggestion - write one story, try to complete it at least with regular updates (this can be difficult and practically not possible for many users - considering personal life and personal works - to me 1st priority be family, family, family alone - next manage some time to write stories)
but not completing a story and starting a new one - i dont think it working fine.
It can be just some stupid things i wrote above -- because end of the day, I am only a reader not a writer (i dont know anything about the difficulties of a writer in setting up characters, writing story and making the readers stick to it)
i came to this website during lockdown (some months back) and following some long stories, thats all.
I read some stories and I request updates to those stories which I find quite interesting.
I spent time to read stories and that's all my contribution here