Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

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Thank you krish for sharing your thoughts.... To be honest I like that you kept Kirsh and Meera together at the end. The one where meera is with Ashish or Desai could not have kept the story together since Meera and Krish would separate and their stories with their partners would be running separately. 
As a reader (this is my personal choice) I want some Connection that keeps the story together for me. The connection here is Meera and Krish's Marriage and their Mad Love. What ever desai was in meera's life, she was still krish's wife and their love of different madness; this connection kept a hope that the story will revolve around meera and krish. Even when Krish and Meera separated in second part there were day to day meeting and they both used das but still did everything around each other. They never thought of divorce. Not once meera or krish thought of divorce. Even at the end of 3rd part meera and krish were trying to fix their marriage. Krish was trying to get rid of desai and meera wanted to be with krish than desai.

If a story has parallel streams than that should be from beginning. This story in all parts was revolving around Meera and Krish. They never had parallel story lines of their own. So if this was introduced in mid of 3rd chapter then I would have lost interest. The reason is you have created the bond with meera and krish so strong that if they went in separate way then there would be no interest.

These are my personal opinion and I am glad that you wrote the end that what you wrote. I and my mind are peaceful that I got to enjoy this epic legendary story of Meera and Krish instead of them being with others and regretting in their life.

Another personal thing that I want to share is that I do not want to read stories that have darkpaths, regrets, hurtful journeys. We have seen a different world since March 2020. 2021 has be devastating for many; even 2022 was bad for me. Many have lost healthy persons within a week in 2022. What I have learnt from past 3 years is that in this journey of life we have to be happy, make everyone around us happy and bring happiness to all. Reading this story brought happiness to me. Meera and Krish being together felt personally happy at the end. To all fellow readers this is my personal opinion.

Another thing with Meera. Can Meera see Krish with other women? This has not happened in part 3. But when she came to that krish was with Ananya and what Ananya was doing with krish, Meera left what she was doing with Das and immediately stormed to their house and confronted krish and we saw her outburst. Next was with nikita when krish told Meera on call that he is willing to move on. Meera who was saperated from krish still rushed to the place where krish told he was but could not find him and was devastated. 

What I have seen or felt from author's narration, what ever Meera does she cannot see krish with other women. In part 2 she tried to setup krish with other women when they were separate but that was never a serious attempt and then she realised the krish will never be without her. With desai she knows that desai had many women in past and he is not exclusive but she cannot confront or show that outburst to desai that she does with Krish. About wanting kids; Meera said this only  and only to krish by herself. Even in last chapter it was meera who told krish that she wants his child by herself. With desai it was always desai using her peak pleasure when he asked meera to have his child.


The alternative plot where Meera is with other and krish with others and they regret does not feel right. I doubt Meera will be happy with others knowing that krish is with other women.